Well, it looks right, but I'd need to sit down and look at it to tell if it makes sense from a dialect standpoint. I'm not nearly an expert in Middle English, but there are five dialect groups that each have things different. That said, there is mixing in most works, so if nothing else it could probably be an example of mixing if nothing else.

When I'm not sitting here with my developer hat on, I'll check it out. I did change the th combinations back to thorns and the gh combinations back to yogh's when I reposted it. But spelling isn't normalized, so that's not necessarily wrong either.